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I Edited More Than 500 Books: Here Are the 10 Mistakes I See in Almost Every Unpublished Novel

I’m a book editor of fiction and memoir, and after editing more than 500 novels and memoirs over the past 14 years, I’ve noticed patterns in almost every unpublished novel. (And no, it’s not better grammar, fancier vocabulary, or “more showing, less telling.”) It’s a… Read More »I Edited More Than 500 Books: Here Are the 10 Mistakes I See in Almost Every Unpublished Novel

First Chapter Critique

In my first chapter critique service, I read your book’s first chapter (up to 4,000 words), adding comments for suggestion/improvement along the way. I focus on areas of confusing or vague writing, inconsistencies, or issues that I have as a first-time reader, and big-picture issues with your story’s conflict,… Read More »First Chapter Critique